Eldest daughter

a handwritten response to
@kaylinwrites poetry

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  1. Lisa,

    Eldest daughter here so this made me smile in recognition.

    Thanks for prompting me to look up Weir's poem.

    I love how your response adds a checklist and then rejects it. Love your ending with the image of a braid of daily moments "wrapped round the world." Beautiful.

    I'm also intrigued about The Art of Fighting which I saw on a recommended list earlier today. Sounds like something outside of my eldest daughter comfort zone. Perhaps a good reason to check it out.

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